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Cats Eyes And Cable Guys by ~villainamInone:iconvillainamInone:



Murder in your palm
Blood drips as you squeeze what is left
Never once glancing upward.
The shock in my eyes
Seems to make up for the lack in yours -
Who knew the penalty was death?
I wanted to hold you
All I ever wanted was your hand
My hand
Together.
But you speak as smashed grapes
And the wine pours from your mouth
Intoxicating every moment I spend
with you?
...without you
You're here but your heart ran astray
Seems you were over me
Before we began to start...
None of that matters now
You still squeeze close -
Pushing the knife deeper
Then twising it with those brown eyes.
Murder in your palm
Yet you can't even begin you feel
That the warmth that drips down your arm
May be the last warmth in me
©2006-2009 ~villainamInone
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mm. I was angry when I wrote this. I bleeped a few lines out to rid the poem of any F-bombs, because I don't really swear much. And if the person it's about reads this...it's really not your fault, it's mine....it's just how I feel sometimes.
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wow. detailed imagery. nice job. very dark. but good all the same.

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"The truth about the truth is it hurts, so we lie"

shuffle this deck of chance. i'll play in this game of life.

dont say a word. my secret to u is that there is no such thing as a secret.
thank you very much :)

--
danka
steve man, life is a pain in the neck

kinda like


JACKIE CHAN!
:jarksaber:

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I killed the king of deceit
hah; i like Josh's comment.
and i like this.
it's really different from your usual..
more Josh-like.
but it's good.
i think you should post the un-edited..
censoring is for pansies..
No, I'm fine thanks....and I actually write crap like this all the time...It's probably my most common style; I just don't post it mainly for censorship reasons usually. Actually I think this is the first time I went ahead and sort of put one up

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danka

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